Interim Critique:
This critique we didn't get a lot of feedback from unfortunately.
From here we talked to Fay and Tim which gave us a lot of good advice as to where to go and how our work is looking. We developed the poster and changed the colour of the island to make it look more like an island which really added to the overall design of the poster creating better visual flow.
There was also comments on the certificate flyer being good but the word 'a' is by itself and lonely so it should have another word or be removed. The back is also really messy with the type, we were aware of this as shaun never created the type in the same trasher font for the back. We will have this for Thursday's lesson.
Looking at all of our work and spreads with Fay and Tim -
These are looking nice cohesive and really do attract and appeal to children. They gave lots of tips and pointers and little bits to change to make the overall design attractive. We also need to start creating the mobile sites up and thinking about how they will work well.
List of things to do:
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